Senior Project

        Mostly things went well, but I messed up by adding an extra tab in my bibliography. Overall I think I argued my point well and generally did well staying with in the rules and following MLA format. I think I could have gotten more hard facts and worked them into my research paper but I believe that I got my point across regardless. I also think that I could have gotten into the persuasive arguments a little quicker but I decided to give a few hard examples of why fast food is unhealthy instead. I did not get my paper back because I had a friend read it and than catch the errors n my paper before I turned it in. Here is a link to a copy of my senior project I put on Google docs so my friend could read it, the spacing all got messed up on it though, just a warning.